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Lithium
Rockhampton, Queensland
246 posts
I know Ausgamers loves trance.

I made this and I was hoping you good people could give me some feedback.

05:36pm 02/04/12 Permalink
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05:36pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Scooter
Brisbane, Queensland
5747 posts
Little short and doesn't seem to reach any intensity/height that I'm use to with my (limited) exposure to trance.
05:41pm 02/04/12 Permalink
jaydub
Gold Coast, Queensland
73 posts
i liked the build up, thinking something awesome was gonna happen but it was kinda at the same pace throughout the whole song.. it was ok
05:44pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Lithium
Rockhampton, Queensland
247 posts
Little short and doesn't seem to reach any intensity/height that I'm use to with my (limited) exposure to trance.


Oh yeah I wasn't going for the classic 8minute long build up. This is my first attempt at making anything from scratch so I wanted to make it short and sweet and then see how I go turning it into someting bigger later.
05:52pm 02/04/12 Permalink
eski
Perth, Western Australia
818 posts
Go make another track and leave this one behind. When you're starting out quantity over quality imo, you learn a lot faster and get used to producing things in a decent time frame. Otherwise you'll end up spending months/years working on individual tracks and never getting anywhere.

What did you use to make it?
05:55pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Lithium
Rockhampton, Queensland
248 posts

What did you use to make it?


Fl Studio 10 with nexus plugin.

Appreciate the advice, will take it on board.
06:04pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Whoop
Brisbane, Queensland
19644 posts
i liked the build up, thinking something awesome was gonna happen but it was kinda at the same pace throughout the whole song.. it was ok

Same, about 30 seconds in I found myself wanting to fast forward. I think the build up to the silence is just a tiny bit too long and monotonous, needs a bass track or something imho. It sort of reminds me of that cocaine song.

Otherwise it'd probably make a decent sound track to a racing game on loop or menu music for something (being so short).
06:37pm 02/04/12 Permalink
paveway
Brisbane, Queensland
16539 posts
yeah there is actually only like 3 guys on here that are stuck in the 90s and like trance
06:38pm 02/04/12 Permalink
infi
Brisbane, Queensland
18604 posts
trance is boring, infuse a bit of bangin techno and the you will be cooking with gas.

nonetheless kudos on having a go.
06:50pm 02/04/12 Permalink
z0r
Brisbane, Queensland
1866 posts
lacks depth (bass). melodically it decent. bur similar complaint about it not going anywhere. buildups and breakdowns are named that for a reason. added complexity with each iteration is pro forma, but usually you want it to go a bit heavier at least somewhere there.

keep it up dude.
06:56pm 02/04/12 Permalink
JakeG
Thailand
1068 posts
Keep it up man that is decent for a beginner.

Lol stuck in the 90's? Trance is huuuuuuge



Even electro/trance sounding genres are emerging now. (track above isn't an example - just good trance).
07:24pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Whoop
Brisbane, Queensland
19646 posts
dubstep is the new trance, or so I hear. It's in pretty much every tv ad recently.
07:26pm 02/04/12 Permalink
JakeG
Thailand
1069 posts
^ before I came to live in Thailand you couldn't find a dubstep night..

Wen't back to Bris last xmas and they are banging it out of EB games and every second retail shop.
07:48pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Damo
Brisbane, Queensland
5993 posts
dubstep is the musically retarded.

Trance has and will always be around, while dubstep is just a fad.
08:16pm 02/04/12 Permalink
FaceMan
Brisbane, Queensland
8628 posts
Fruity Loops is awesome fun.
Its very simple to use
The shareware lets you use most of the functions but you cant save your work.

Does anyone do Trance + Guitars ?
08:22pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Reverend Evil™
Wynnum, Queensland
20226 posts
I didn't mind it. Although I reckon around the 1 minute mark when it starts to go quiet, there should be some type of other noise thingy going on. Like a heavy but fading thumping noise that cuts out just before the next bit kicks in. If that makes sense.
11:15pm 02/04/12 Permalink
Vash
3481 posts
fuck i hate dubstep. song starts off all good, nice tunes.. BANG, DERP DERP HERP GRRARGHSAGFRHG DERRRRRrrr
sounds like shit.
this is pretty much the only dubstep song ive found that sounds decent. Most dubstep sounds awesome until the signature dubstep tune pops on and ruins it.

12:21am 03/04/12 Permalink
Lithium
Rockhampton, Queensland
250 posts
Yeah nero is pretty much the only dubstep artist I'll listen to, he is actually creative with his wub wubs.

Whats the consensus on Drum N Bass here? For me its a hit and miss. i got the top 20 songs of whatever year pack and I reckon 90% were just boring, and the rest scaled from not bad to amazing.

The best DnB artist i've heard is Feint. I'd love to be able to make stuff like this:

12:37am 03/04/12 Permalink
Reality
Sydney, New South Wales
375 posts
learn a bit of music theory and you'll notice that every single piece of music you make will sound exponentially better, that's my advice.
12:57am 03/04/12 Permalink
Reverend Evil™
Wynnum, Queensland
20228 posts
Music I like...

Dubstep - shit
Drum and bass - too fast to dance to
Trance - awesome
House - awesome
Other - depends who it is
12:57am 03/04/12 Permalink
Whoop
Brisbane, Queensland
19650 posts
Music I like...

Dubstep - shit
Drum and bass - too fast to dance to
Trance - awesome
House - awesome
Other - depends who it is

My taste in music is... strange. At the moment I've taken a liking to this particular song
01:14am 03/04/12 Permalink
ctd
UK
9840 posts
Was in the Netherlands Saturday night for A state of trance 550... it's far from dead and stuck in the 90s.

maybe if u are a shitkunt who has only been to terrible aussie music festivals with even worse lineups olloolol
04:02am 03/04/12 Permalink
paveway
Brisbane, Queensland
16540 posts
lawl
07:06am 03/04/12 Permalink
Sc00bs
Brisbane, Queensland
8755 posts
go to europe and say trance is dead, they will laugh in your face and tell you to continue listening to your eminem ep
07:08am 03/04/12 Permalink
paveway
Brisbane, Queensland
16541 posts
it might not be dead but it's on the backburner, no one is getting excited by new trance tracks.

trance doesn't get any play time on pete tong's radio show every friday night which is one of the real markers to watch for brand new music. House has exploded especially in america and it's been building and changing for 10 years the culmination of what the swedish house mafia have become in the last 3 years is proof of this

trance is still just trance, same old shit.
09:17am 03/04/12 Permalink
Damo
Brisbane, Queensland
5994 posts
So if Pete Tong isn't plastering it all over his radio show doesn't mean it's on the backburner?

Just because you think no one is excited about new trance tracks is another solo opinion.
09:32am 03/04/12 Permalink
maRtz
Brisbane, Queensland
3568 posts
fuck i hate dubstep. song starts off all good, nice tunes.. BANG, DERP DERP HERP GRRARGHSAGFRHG DERRRRRrrr
sounds like shit.


amen to that
01:31pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Sc00bs
Brisbane, Queensland
8756 posts
A massive number of house/shit thats played on the radio, that has come out recently has ripped the beat from some 90's trance song - upped the tempo and put a dirtier bassline behind it.


haha pete tong, yeah he is big but he doesnt influence the flow of music by his radio station.

The amount of trance dj's that have their own shows that are just as big/if not bigger than tongs is ridiculous. Tiesto has had over 200, above and beyond, armin, even tydi has over 100 radio shows just to name a few

01:36pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Pinky
Melbourne, Victoria
13008 posts
I think it's very good - but yeah, missing some drums for me as well.

Also +1 to FL Studio. Great app.
01:57pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Draxy
Brisbane, Queensland
1140 posts
I don't know, I don't mind this one...

02:08pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Reverend Evil™
Wynnum, Queensland
20246 posts
That one isn't so bad when you're watching the dude getting all crazy and shit. But when you listen to it without watching the video.

Here is the original...

02:17pm 03/04/12 Permalink
HurricaneJim
Brisbane, Queensland
1102 posts
02:24pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Reverend Evil™
Wynnum, Queensland
20250 posts
Let there be house?

03:38pm 03/04/12 Permalink
paveway
Brisbane, Queensland
16543 posts
The amount of trance dj's that have their own shows that are just as big/if not bigger than tongs is ridiculous. Tiesto has had over 200, above and beyond, armin, even tydi has over 100 radio shows just to name a few



sorry but tong has been broadcasting for 20 years on the bbc radio 1, who do you think was involved with unearthing guys like armin or daft punk or chemical brothers?

pete is in full control of what he plays on his show

he is the biggest and most respected.
05:35pm 03/04/12 Permalink
JakeG
Thailand
1070 posts
Trying to say nobody is excited about new trance is obvious troll..
05:41pm 03/04/12 Permalink
ctd
UK
9841 posts
lolz pave. It is because judge jules (who has been around equally as long) has his own radio show that directly follows on from pets which focuses on trance and big room.

armins radio show is the most listened to radio show in the world (including shit kunts like that host off american idol).

Above and beyond won the essential mix of 2011 (hosted by pete tong>!>!>!)

but whatevers bro i bet shm were awesome at some skag in brisbane

along with hosting his own stage at ultra in miami armin also closed the event on the main stage. tiesto closed the other night.

(btw i dont hate house, i love it but you got no idea br0)

last edited by ctd at 20:52:03 03/Apr/12
08:48pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Agamemnon
Brisbane, Queensland
1006 posts
hah Whoop, cool song... not something i thought i would like but catchy :)
10:10pm 03/04/12 Permalink
ctd
UK
9842 posts
It was cool the other night a lot of heavier stuff and older style stuff was played in some of the main rooms.
This was the last set in the blue room John ocallaghan.


and for one of armins sets he did a classics mix


this was his big room set


Fav set of the night (when was peaking hardcore)


Anyway asot550 was an epic night. Best festival I have been to. Beat any night I've had in Ibiza

last edited by ctd at 22:28:21 03/Apr/12
10:26pm 03/04/12 Permalink
E.T.
Queensland
4258 posts
I don't know, I don't mind this one...



I've watched this a few times now. Its an amazing performance. Even an 40 somthing old bloke like me can appreciate it.
11:08pm 03/04/12 Permalink
JakeG
Thailand
1071 posts
ctd = madcunt (nohomo)

ps. Pave you're still pretty cool too.
11:41pm 03/04/12 Permalink
Pinky
Melbourne, Victoria
13014 posts
My taste in music is... strange.

Could be worse. You could have musical taste like Raven.
01:02am 04/04/12 Permalink
straw hat hippie
Brisbane, Queensland
358 posts
I swear based on all you say Paveway lady gaga and pink should be your favourite artists. They tear up the radio and america and everywhere else.....
01:56am 04/04/12 Permalink
no you hang up
Brisbane, Queensland
1982 posts
hating on dubstep just makes you look old.
07:28am 04/04/12 Permalink
Damo
Brisbane, Queensland
5995 posts
ctd, damn you!!!

Got any photos from your the 550 show you went to?

I went to 500 in sydney last year and was/is one of the greatest gigs i've been to.
07:58am 04/04/12 Permalink
paveway
Brisbane, Queensland
16549 posts
lol TRANCE RAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGE
07:59am 04/04/12 Permalink
Whoop
Brisbane, Queensland
19656 posts
05:16pm 04/04/12 Permalink
ctd
UK
9843 posts
I have plenty of photos but they are all fairly low quality because we broke our camera the night before and the lens was all dirty. Nothing special unfortunately.

Yeah I had mates that went to the sydney one last year said it was epic. You struggle to find good trance in aus. Armin Only in melb was good but I got way drunk

I also went to den bosch last year and London this year. Above and Beyond group therapy in London this weekend - just down the road haha :P I'll probably move back to AUS in the future so I don't want to waste my limited opportunity in going to decent EDM events.

This would do it a bit of justice instead of my crap photos


last edited by ctd at 22:11:54 04/Apr/12
10:06pm 04/04/12 Permalink
XaltD
Queensland
1014 posts
Enjoyed it, thanks for sharing :)
10:15pm 04/04/12 Permalink
dais
Brisbane, Queensland
8886 posts
Trance > Swedish House Mafia
10:28pm 04/04/12 Permalink
BOHEMION
Brisbane, Queensland
491 posts
10:35pm 04/04/12 Permalink
koopz
Brisbane, Queensland
9616 posts
keep up the good work Lithium.

permit yourself to look everywhere for inspiration, learn from everything you can - nothing sucks.. only provides data.

Don't fall into the trap of closing yourself off from other artists and other genres.

Art is everywhere if you can feel it.

(btw keep in mind that that 'zing' you feel fades with age.. max out every moment you can - though try not to hurt what's important to your work in the process. Art in the old 'pysycal sense' complicates things personally and at times emotionally as our days add up)

last edited by koopz at 23:42:33 04/Apr/12
11:36pm 04/04/12 Permalink
mongie
Brisbane, Queensland
7536 posts
06:52am 05/04/12 Permalink
mongie
Brisbane, Queensland
7537 posts
oh yeah

and this one...

06:54am 05/04/12 Permalink
taggs
5968 posts
trance doesn't get any play time on pete tong's radio show


hahaha
06:57am 05/04/12 Permalink
Damo
Brisbane, Queensland
5997 posts
Nice vid CTD!

Australia gets to miss out on some awesome events and going to nightclub sucks balls these days. Going to see cosmic gate with emma hewitt on 13/4 at family. First time in a night club in over 2-3 years I think..
08:12am 05/04/12 Permalink
Hemerage
Brisbane, Queensland
15491 posts
Logged in to say that Trance is shit.
Hi!
12:34pm 06/04/12 Permalink
mongie
Brisbane, Queensland
7538 posts
YEAH BRO, HARDCORE YO
07:03pm 06/04/12 Permalink
Jc_23
Brisbane, Queensland
545 posts
Nice one! Noticed some weird increase in volume at 1:10 or something!? :)
08:00am 07/04/12 Permalink
Lithium
Rockhampton, Queensland
259 posts
I was going to start a new thread but figured I'd leave this here.

I've done a fair reimagination of the original track I put up a few weeks back, which you can find in the OP.

Ausgamers is the only place outside my group of good friends that I try to get some quality feedback from the users since I know many of you are trance/house/electro fans.

I took much of the criticism here and have come back with this. Again its sort of like a sample of what could be a full 4-5minute trance track, and this would be the core of it. It now has a bassline and a fresh build up melody. The only thing Im still not happy about is the final bit it where it escalates a notch. I just found it a bit tinny but I left it there anyway. Hope you all like it.



Original:




And heres another track I did the other week:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQByzp-n7DQ
07:14pm 03/05/12 Permalink
dais
Brisbane, Queensland
9040 posts
The new one you linked to sounds good mate. Keep going, you're making good progress.
07:22pm 03/05/12 Permalink
Timmeh
Brisbane, Queensland
2216 posts
09:08pm 03/05/12 Permalink
Spook
Brisbane, Queensland
33697 posts
lols pave and his homo obsession for pete tong.

nothing wrong with quality banging trance, like all genre's theres good stuff and theres plenty of shit stuff;

also, nice hj, dye witness is fucking awesome:

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